Writing

In term 1 and 2 we were writing with Mrs. bates she help me with my writing, my favourite one was the Andy story, my story isn’t funny, but I think its good, the topic is Andy and Mandy are sky diving.

There two or three I remember there is one about hawk, a seagull and a tsunami it’s not a good storyBut it’s not too bad.

The editing was easy, well sometimes it confusing editing because when if you know the word is incorrect you don’t know how to spell it some time you now it.

The portal story for me took me a long time to right my story has 753 words the story is a boy that goes on a fieldtrip and end with a pit.

Gust before that, we made a solider letter, to say we went off to war and we sent a letter to are loved ones, mine was to me cousin Jacob, mine was set in Egypt for training the town in the north.